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the ballad of by ~we17children:iconwe17children:



hello world
hello world
hello world
hello  world
hello wo rold

i opened my eyes to reveal a most shocking revalation. everyone was dead. the .45 screamers and steamers pummeled their brains all over the floor and walls and i was just alive

hello world

but this is alright and okay. i'm just here and

well i opened my eyes to reveal a most shocking relization. my job was mediocre and i hated my wife. my children are annoying and both of them cant stand me

so i walked out of my building becayuse i was done for the day and i let my shoes take me to strange far off lands known as the parkway and i stood there and let the vehicles soar past me and through me and over me until eventually bright blue lights and sirens took me to a warm bed and an IV in my arm.

well i opened my eyes to reveal a most schocking determination in the blood of the nurses. most of them were looking at me as though i was either dead or dying, neither of which were really the case hello world so i got out of the bed and grabbed a few pills 4 good luck i guess nd choked em down and walked out the door

i went to talk to my wife but she wasnt home she was deadi guess annie are you ok i said are you ok annie but there was no answer oh no i said something was wrong i looked at the bloodstains on the carpet and died i think

then i opened my eyes to reveal a most soothing thought and took it to heart that everything was ok and the lesson is that it is perfectly ok to be yourself and feel good about your body.
©2009 ~we17children
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Author's Comments

ive been up for like 3 days str8 so i wrote a book abot it can i have a DDDDDDD DD please in the time it took to losten to alien ant farm's rendition of SMOOTH CRIM

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:iconkotsumi:
whya re there no commas

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this comment is pretty legit
:iconkotsumi:
i mean why are there no commas

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this comment is pretty legit
:iconspacebones:
hey kyle explain your grammar to me because you are obviously not trying to be funny

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your v\ry nise
:iconwe17children:
thx vote 4 a dd

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make it last son hehaheha
:iconwe17children:
its ok to feel good about ur body every1 is different :)

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make it last son hehaheha
:iconwe17children:
its ok to feel good about ur body every1 is different

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make it last son hehaheha
:iconspacebones:
oh thx!@@@@

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your v\ry nise
:iconchitsu23:
Wow Mr. Kyle, you're a writer?

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Exscuse me Help Desk, what's a signature?

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